Wednesday, November 30, 2011

Center of Influence by Tom Blubaugh

Thanks to Tom for stopping by and sharing how our books, and our lives, can affect many.


Center of Influence

A point of origin, as of influence, ideas, or actions that produces an effect without any apparent exertion of force or direct exercise of command.

Does the above definition sound like you? I assure you it does. It is a perfect

description of you. Every thing you do influences someone or something in some way. Have you ever tossed a pebble into a river? Did you notice how the impact of the stone moved a circle of water out until it finally returned to the calm apparent before the incident? Your words and actions are like that of the stone. They cause a “ripple effect” and literally move things around you. Whether the effect is good or bad depends on you.

Have you noticed?

* How an action in the Middle East causes the stock market to move?

* How an accident on the freeway backs up traffic for miles?

* How a stuck stoplight disrupts traffic?

* How an injured player stops a game?

* How a comedy scene makes a whole audience laugh?

* How an unkind word in a crowd can bring all those who hear become silent?

We could go on and on and on.

Take a piece of paper and draw a small circle in the middle. Write your name in the circle. Then draw a circle for every person with whom you have a relationship. Place their name in the circle. These don’t have to be close relationships. Include family members, friends, fellow employees, neighbors, people you do business with, church members, other organization members, and so on. Then connect all of those circles to the number of other circles representing people with whom they are connected. You will be amazed at your circle of influence.

Do you notice how many of them are people you like or love? Can you see how every word and action affects this vast number of people? I say vast because most weddings and funerals have approximately 200 people in attendance. I say 200 people is a vast number because 200 x 200 = 40,000. Amazing isn’t it? And that is only about two ripples in the water.

Tom Blubaugh is a freelance writer living in Southwest Missouri with Barbara, his wife. They have six children and fourteen grandchildren. Tom has written non-fiction most of his adult life, but has recently written a historical fiction titled Night of the Cossack, published by Bound by Faith Publishers. This is Tom’s first novel. He co-wrote a devotional journal in 2009 for Barbour Publishing titled The Great Adventure. His other writings include articles for a denominational magazine and an insurance publication. He also self-published a book, Behind the Scenes of the Bus Ministry in 1974.

Tom started writing poetry at the age of fourteen. His vision of turning them into lyrics for rock and roll songs for popular artists didn’t develop. He considers writing to be a God-given talent and feels led to develop it. His first novel was published at his age of 69. Tom says it’s never too late. He is now writing a sequel.

Tom spent twelve years as an insurance agent and eleven years as a financial planner. He is the past president of Jericho Commission, Inc., and still serves on the board of directors.

Sunday, November 27, 2011

Other Side of Darkness by Linda Rondeau



Book Look by Carol McClain

It is my great honor to welcome Linda Rondeau, founder of Pentalk and long time friend, as featured author on Book Look. For years Linda has mentored other writers, and her first release is The Other Side Of Darkness.


These are the things I will do; I will not forsake them. I will lead the blind by ways they have not known, along unfamiliar paths I will guide them (Isaiah 42:16).

After setting out on a forced vacation, and literally running into a moose, Manhattan Assistant D.A. Samantha Knowles finds it’s not so bad being stranded in a quirky but intriguing Adirondack town. But when her three-year prosecution against convicted killer, Harlan Styles begins to unravel, she’s thrust into a whirlwind of haunting memories, fear, and danger. And suddenly, Haven isn’t so safe, after all.
      With no future in Haven, and no way to escape the small town, teacher Zack Bordeaux fears he’s doomed to a life of mediocrity. Haunted by the deaths of his wife and son, landscape artist Jonathan Gladstone feels bound to an estate he both loves and loathes. But when Zack and Jonathon meet Samantha, their lives take on a different course.
     Three lives intertwined, tied together by dangerous circumstance and the faint echoes of an elusive hope. To make it through, each must find their way to the Light that’s found only on the other side of darkness.


Trailer Link:

Blogs

You can order The Other Side of Darkness at:
http://www.pelicanbookgroup.com/ec/the-other-side-of-darkness-softcover

It is also available at Amazon in both ebook and hard copy. 

Linda and I chatted, and she shared some interesting thoughts.


What motivated you to write this particular story?

I’ve long been intrigued with the Southern Adirondack area, its history and beauty. When I conceived of a character whose life would be impacted because of an accident that stranded her in this area, I knew it had to be set here.

Why did you choose a moose for Samantha Knowles to hit?

The moose began as a plot device. I needed her to hit something larger than a deer that would total her car. I saw pictures of a moose accident and the whole scene took shape. Before the story was completed, I had a near run in with one. A writer friend thought the incident prophetic.

What would you say was the major theme of The Other Side of Darkness?

The story is about forgiveness…not just for the wrong done to us by others but forgiving ourselves. Sadie Golden talks about a backpack of guilt we strap on ourselves, guilt that God has already forgiven us for and buried in the sea of His forgetfulness. Secondarily, the book is about finding good from the pain of our lives.

Has one character in this work captured your heart more than any other? Can you tell us why?

I think my favorite character is Sadie Golden, a good-hearted woman with secrets. She’s loving and industrious, but why does she skirt on legalities with the operation of The Lighthouse Lounge?

Can you tell us a little about yourself?

What can I say? My life is in a whirlwind at the moment. Several months ago, I packed up what I could fit in my little Ford Focus and headed to Jacksonville, Fl. I didn’t know for how long. But, we sold our house in Malone and bought a house here. Now all that’s missing is my husband who can’t retire until June. It has been a growth experience for sure. I’ve been challenged in ways I never thought possible. Everything has become new…and God threw a book contract into the mix.

What is the greatest lesson your writing journey has taught you?

To be committed to the story and get myself out of it. For years, it was all about the words, showing off my love of turning a phrase or poetic devices. Then I realized that readers aren’t as interested in the mechanics as they are the story itself. What an eye opener.

You are the founder of Pentalk. Can you tell us what inspired you to start this particular group?

When talking to a writer friend at a local writer conference, I was hit with the concept of a mixed group. There are so many groups that are geared to a particular aspect of writing, such as marketing or craft development, genre, or religious or general market. Some groups deal more with critique or information. I wanted to develop a group where writers could support one another as well as learn about the craft, a place not only to “brag” or post their accomplishments, but a place to ask questions and receive guidance from writers who have traveled a little farther on the road. I thought of Walmart…a store that is a one-stop shopping place. I wanted to develop a writer group with that in mind. A place where writers can have it all. 

Is there any advice you’d like to share with aspiring writers?

Don’t give up on your dreams. They are a part of your unique self. To sacrifice your dream is to deny who you are as a person.

Anything else you’d like to add?

Thanks to all the writers who have encouraged me along this path. To name each and everyone would take more cyber space than we’re allowed!
You can contact Linda and read more of her work at the following locations:



Follow Linda's blogs:
This Daily Grind
Visit her at www.lindarondeau.com or find her on facebook, twitter and google+

Friday, November 25, 2011

Finding Your Blogging Niche by Suzanne Hartmann

Thanks to Suzanne for joining us again today!

Finding Your Blogging Niche

Finding your niche is more of an art than a science. That means you’ll have to feel your way around. It won’t happen overnight. Unless you’re an expert at something and everyone wants your advice, you will probably fall into your niche by trial and error. In my case, it took more than a year; for many it takes longer, but there are some guidelines that will help you along the way.

Start at the beginning. Set up your blog. Don’t worry about a theme or a focus. Just do it. At this point, it’s more important to get started than to know where you’re going. When I jumped into the blogging world, I had no idea what I was doing, so I focused on the basics. I worked my way through the design process until I had something that looked presentable. Okay, so it didn’t have any content, but it at least looked like a blog and was ready to go.

Write the first several posts. What should you write about? Write about anything and everything. What caught your attention this week? What do you like to write about most? What has been on your heart lately? Since I wanted to present myself as an author, I focused on writing. My posts about my writing journey were a mishmash of writing, inspiration, and a journal. Your posts may be all over the place to begin with, but that’s okay. You’ll start wide, then narrow your focus.

Invite your friends to follow your blog. Post your articles as notes on Facebook. Tweet about them on Twitter. See which articles get the most comments. Find what you feel most comfortable writing about. Use the feedback to narrow your topics. If the only thing people comment on are the articles about the funny things your kids do, write more of them. If you get no comments on a particular subject over several weeks, try a different topic. For my blog, the posts that got the most response were the ones that explained grammar rules. So I wrote more of them. As I learned more about the craft of writing, I shared the lessons with my readers. They responded, and I eventually earned a reputation as someone who can explain grammar rules and writing guidelines in a simple, just-the-facts-ma’am style that’s easy to understand.

There are only 2 rules:

#1 - Post consistently. That may be only once a week to begin with, but that’s fine. Then people know that if they check every week there will be a new article to read. If they keep checking back and the same article is there several times, they’ll eventually quit checking.

#2 – Keep your posts short, no more than 500-800 words. Reading on the computer is harder on the eyes and not as comfortable as snuggling up on the couch with a good book. So people have a tendency to lose interest quickly. If your posts are longer than that, break them into more than one post and make it into a series.

Ease into your niche. It takes time to find your niche, so don’t feel like you have to rush it. Feedback and your interests will direct you towards your niche, but don’t rule out serendipity and heavenly guidance. Listen to your own instincts as well. Keep narrowing your scope. Occasionally try something new and different. But most importantly, keep blogging. Eventually you will ease into your niche.

You never know where your blogging will lead you. Blogging might begin as a chore, but sometimes it leads to unexpected places. For me, it has lead to writing a book about the craft of writing. The Top 10 series of articles I wrote for my blog were so popular that I consolidated them into an easy-to-use book so authors can have the information at their fingertips as they write and revise. This is something that never entered my mind when I started my blog. Keep an open mind and your blogging may lead to surprising places.

Enjoy the ride. No matter where you are in your blogging journey, relax. Don’t pressure yourself to find a niche. Take your time and let yourself fall into your niche. If you keep at it, you will find it.


SUZANNE HARTMANN is a homeschool mom of three and lives in the St. Louis area. She loves spending time with her wonderful husband, and treasures the opportunity to train up her children in the way they should go. To relax, she enjoys scrapbooking, reading, and Bible study.

She holds a Bachelor of Arts degree in Composition & Linguistics from Western Illinois University. She began writing fiction when her children were young, and four of her short stories were published in a Milliken Publishing reading workbook. PERIL: Fast Track Thriller #1 is her first novel.

On the editorial side, she is a contributing editor with Port Yonder Press and operates the Write This Way Critique Service. She enjoys encouraging other authors and working with them to improve their writing..

Through her blog, Write This Way, Suzanne has become known as an author who can explain writing rules and techniques in easy-to-understand terms. Her popular Top 10 series of articles formed the basis for her e-book on the craft of writing, Write This Way: Take Your Writing to a New Level. She also blogs about homeschooling at Bloomin' Plumes.

Find Suzanne on the web at:

BLOG – Write This Way (http://suzanne-hartmann2.blogspot.com)

WEBSITE – Fast Track Thrillers (http://fasttrackthrillers.blogspot.com)

Learn more about her books at:

WRITE THIS WAY: Take Your Writing to a New Level (http://suzanne-hartmann2.blogspot.com/2007/01/write-this-way-take-your-writing-to-new.html)

PERIL: A Fast Track Thriller (http://fasttrackthrillers.blogspot.com/)

Wednesday, November 23, 2011

Happy Thanksgiving!

From our family to yours - Happy Thanksgiving!

We're thankful for all of you!

What are you thankful for?

A Log Cabin Christmas, NYT Bestselling Authors Share Their Stories

Today we have SEVEN very special guests! These lovely ladies, along with two others, hit the NYT Bestseller list earlier this year and have stopped by to tell us a little bit about it. Extra thanks to Erica Vetsch for helping organize it all!

Also included in this collection are stories by Kelly Eileen Hake and Debra Ullrick, who recently lost her father. Our prayers remain with her and her family.

So here, in no particular order, except the order they appear on the cover... The authors of

A Log Cabin Christmas
A New York Times Bestseller

From Wanda Brunstetter:

Wanda had just returned from a month-long book signing tour when she got the news that A Log Cabin Christmas had made the NYT Best Seller list. To top off that wonderful news, she also learned that her newest release, The Healing also made the NYT Best Seller list that week.

Bio: Wanda Brunstetter is an award-winning romance novelist who has led millions of readers to lose their heart in the Amish life. She is the author of almost 50 books with more than 5 million copies sold. Many of her books have landed on the top bestseller lists, including the New York Times, Publisher’s Weekly, CBA, ECPA, and CBD. Wanda is considered one of the founders of the Amish fiction genre, and her work has been covered by national publications, includingTime Magazine and USA Today.

Margaret Brownley:

Margaret’s story: Snow Angel

I heard the exciting news at the ACFW conference. I received Rebecca Germany’s message on my phone while waiting in the lobby to meet with my publicists and agent. Just then my agent, Natasha Kern, walked up and I blurted it out. Natasha was still jumping up and down when the publicists arrived. There we were, four adults in the lobby of the hotel, acting like kids on a trampoline.

News traveled fast. A week later I attended church and my pastor announced a celebrity in attendance. I glanced around to see who it was and much to my shock it was me!

Margaret Brownley
Author of The Rocky Creek Romance series

More Love and Laughter from Margaret Brownley
Available now: A Vision of Lucy
A Log Cabin Christmas Collection/Snow Angel
Coming in March 2012; Dawn Comes Early

Bio:

Thrills, mystery, suspense, romance: Margaret penned it all. Nothing wrong with that—except she happened to be writing for the church newsletter. After making the church picnic read like a Grisham novel, her former pastor took her aside and said, "Maybe God's calling you to write fiction."

So that’s what Margaret did. She now has more than 25 novels to her credit, including bestselling, RITA finalist A Lady Like Sarah—not bad for someone who flunked 8thgrade English. Just don’t ask her to diagram a sentence. www.margaretbrownley.com

From Jane Kirkpatrick:

To be honest, I attributed the NYT honor to the other authors and not me! The Courting Quilt is my first novella and Log Cabin Christmas my first chance to be part of a collection so I'm giving credit to all the other authors who have written novellas and romances and written them well. Wanda had another title on the list as well so her fans must be commended for noticing good things! I love being in the company of these fine writers. An email from Wanda Brunstetter forwarded by the editor is how I learned of the news. When I announced the NYT listing at a signing I had for another title of mine, the crowd applauded and then they bought the book! That was a delight! Jane Kirkpatrick

Bio:

After 26 years living, writing and commuting to work on an Indian reservation from her remote ranch in Oregon, Jane and her husband last year moved to small acreage near Bend, Oregon with their two dogs and a cat. She continues to write there and has just completed her twentieth book, and 17th novel. Most of her titles are historical novels based on the lives of real people. She's been a Christy finalist twice, an Oregon Book Award Finalist twice and a WILLA Literary Award winner twice as well. The Courting Quilt, the novella in Log Cabin Christmas is based on an actual quilting story from the 1800s that she set in Brownsville, Oregon in the Willamette Valley.

From Liz Johnson:

Like several of the other authors in this collection, I was at the American Christian Fiction Writers Conference in St. Louis. I'd just had two nerve-wracking appointments with editors I was pitching books toand was just feeling the weight of those meetings lifting when I bumped into a fellow Barbour author and friend Kaye. As I approached, she introduced me to her friends as "New York Times bestselling author Liz Johnson." I laughed off her comment and told her she must be mistaken. She assured me she wasn't.

After a few minutes of mostly stunned silence, I ran to call my mom, who has been a major cheerleader for me since I began writing. When I told her that our book had hit the NYT list, she said in classic mom mode, "Is that a big deal?"

I laughed. "Yes, Mom. It's a very big deal."

Bio:
Liz Johnson is the author of four novels and a full-time marketing specialist
based out of Nashville, TN, where she loves exploring the history of the area,
watching a good movie, and daydreaming her next book. Follow her misadventures
in publishing at www.lizjohnsonbooks.com.

From Liz Tolsma:

I had the pleasure of finding out about the best seller’s list from our wonderful editor, Becky Germany. She discovered me talking to a friend at the ACFW conference in St. Louis and tapped me on my shoulder. With a grin, she said she had some exciting news and then told me we had made the list. The rest of the day, my friend announced my news to everyone we met. What a thrill!

Bio:

Under His Wings, part of A Log Cabin Christmas, is Liz Tolsma’s debut work. She is a long-time member of American Christian Fiction Writers and loves to mentor new writers. When not at her computer, this Wisconsin woman keeps busy with three children, a husband, gardening, walking, camping, kayaking and reading.


From Michelle Ule

I’ve written my own blog post about the experience here.

But I'd be happy to talk about it again, Erica. It makes me laugh every time I think about it--the incongruity of the whole thing.

My local book stores won't have book signings, and the Christian book store won't even stock the book--though last night while I was praying it occurred to me if I went in and showed a copy to the earnest young woman who WANTED to stock it, and told her about the NYT list, she might get her superiors to reconsider. :-)

I was at ACFW with Erica and Liz (and didn't see Margaret) when I got the news and that was WAY too much fun. I was able to pull up the list on my I-touch and show people; watching their jaws drop . . . delicious..

Of course since this was my first published work, many have been asking how I'm going to follow up. I've been saying, "Maybe hit #33?"

:-)

More joy came when one of my Navy wife pals bought a copy at the military exchange yesterday. Now I know I've hit the big time. Thanks, colleagues! :-)

I'm having a party with our church friends next month, am speaking to a writer's group in Bakersfield next weekend and will be at Reboot with Margaret on the 17th. I'm Skyping in with a book club run by Jeane Wynn of Wynn-Wynn media--I took her publicity course at Mt. Hermon last spring and she helped me come up with a marketing plan. Trish Goyer is trying to figure out how to have some of us on her radio show--I need to contact her as well, soon.

Other than that, I'm just enjoying myself, sending signed bookplates to friends far away (which I made out of large labels decorated with a photo of the cover) and laughing with joy. What a blessed Lord we worship!

Blessings to you all,

Michelle

Michelle Ule is a long-time follower of Jesus Christ who lives in northern California. A native of San Pedro, California, she graduated from UCLA where she marched in the clarinet section of the band and wrote for the UCLA Daily Bruin.

A retired Navy wife, she has a terrific husband, four brilliant children, two perfect daughter-in-laws and three adorable grandchildren.

Michelle teaches Bible study to a group of precocious women, counsels women in crisis at a local pregnancy counseling center, and works at a landmark literary agency. In her free time, she travels, writes and reads.

A noted genealogist in some of the more obscure corners of the Internet, she’s the author of Pioneer Stock and Travels with Jeanette, along with several other genealogy books and traveler’s tales. Her debut novella, The Dogtrot Christmas, was published in Barbour Publishing’s A Log Cabin Christmas Collection, September 2011 and appeared on The New York Times best seller list on October 2, 2011.

You can read her musings at www.http://michelleule.wordpress.com

From Erica Vetsch:

I was attending the ACFW conference, and Becky Germany met me in the hallway. She said “Congratulations!” and I couldn’t imagine what for. Then she said Log Cabin Christmas had made the NYT list! Standing with Becky were the amazing Lynn Coleman and Tracie Peterson. They both congratulated me, and I got a hug from Tracie! Squee! It was a moment I won’t soon forget.

Bio: Erica Vetsch is a transplanted Kansan now residing in Minnesota. She loves history and reading, and is blessed to be able to combine the two by writing historical fiction set in the American West. Whenever she’s not following flights of fancy in her fictional world, she’s the company bookkeeper for the family lumber business, mother of two terrific teens, wife to a man who is her total opposite and soul-mate, and avid museum patron.

Friday, November 18, 2011

How PERIL Got Its Twist of NASCAR by Suzanne Hartmann

We're happy to have Suzanne with us today! She's talking about how she incorporated NASCAR into her brand new release! Out today! Be sure to check out the tidbit at the end - right before the back cover blurb and her bio - with some very exciting info.

How PERIL Got Its Twist of NASCAR
By Suzanne Hartmann

Writers get their ideas many ways. In the case of my first novel, PERIL: A Fast Track Thriller, boredom motivated me to create stories to entertain myself while I sat through my kids' violin and piano lessons and baseball and soccer practice. Over a couple of years, what started with a simple question— "What if I could..."—eventually became a set of detailed stories revolving around one main character: they mysterious Lady Anne.

The idea for a twist of NASCAR came after my daughter decided she liked watching stock car races and one day announced that she had chosen a favorite driver. I knew nothing about NASCAR at that point, so I had no idea if this driver was someone we should encourage her to root for. I decided I’d better educate myself and started paying more attention when my husband watched a race (instead of taking a nap).


After a few months of watching the races and pestering my husband with questions. I realized that stock car racing was more interesting than I thought. Eventually, I couldn't resist placing some of the stories I had created at a racetrack. And that naturally led to the addition of a main character who was a NASCAR driver.

At the time I did all of this, I never intended to write a novel. I just had fun thinking about my stories, tweaking them, and adding to them. It wasn’t until I was thinking about one of the stories while taking a walk in our neighborhood one day that a thought popped into my head, “Why don’t you make these stories into a novel?” I fought the idea for a week or so, thinking maybe I was having a premature mid-life crisis or something, but after much prayer, I realized God was nudging me. So in spite of the fact that I had very little experience writing fiction, I set out to weave my stories into a novel.

Although I didn’t do it intentionally, the twist of NASCAR made my novel unique. Not many books incorporate NASCAR into their stories, and most of those that do are romances, not suspense novels. So the blend of NASCAR excitement with the thrills and mystery of the suspense genre that originated with my daughter’s interest in stock car racing shaped my novel into something special. I may not have known what I was doing, but God knew exactly where He was leading me, and it’s something I give Him thanks for daily.

Suzanne sent me this info this week and asked me to make sure I included it! Just in time for Christmas you know ;).

KINDLE GIVE-AWAY

To celebrate the release of my debut novel, I am giving away a Kindle to one lucky winner!


The contest will be open from the release date (Nov. 18) through the end of the blog tour (Dec. 16), and I will announce the winner on Sat. Dec. 17.

To enter, click here: WIN A KINDLE (http://fasttrackthrillers.blogspot.com/2007/01/kindle-give-away.html)

PERIL: A Fast Track Thriller:

A top secret agent with enhanced strength must use her extraordinary abilities during several high-profile assignments, from the White House to NASCAR tracks, while escorting the first Muslim king to convert to Christianity. When unwanted publicity threatens to expose her, she herself becomes a terrorist target, with danger surrounding her on all sides.

“Plenty of action and unexpected twists.”

Foreword by Jimmy Makar, GM of Joe Gibbs Racing

PERIL is now available at Barnes and Noble, Christian Book Distributors, Amazon and OakTara Publishers. And be sure to check out the book trailer! PERIL at YouTube

Suzanne Hartmann is a homeschool mom of three and lives in the St. Louis area. She holds a Bachelor of Arts degree in Composition & Linguistics from Western Illinois University. To relax, she enjoys scrapbooking, reading, and Bible study. She began writing fiction when her children were young, and four of her short stories were published in a Milliken Publishing reading workbook. PERIL: Fast Track Thriller Bk. #1 is her debut novel.

On the editorial side, Suzanne is a contributing editor with Port Yonder Press and operates the Write This Way Critique Service. Through her blog, Write This Way, she has become known as an author who can explain writing rules and techniques in easy-to-understand terms. Her popular Top 10 series of articles formed the basis for her e-book on the craft of writing, Write This Way: Take Your Writing to a New Level.

Find Suzanne:

My Website – FastTrackThrillers (http://fasttrackthrillers.blogspot.com)

My Blog - Write This Way (http://Suzanne-hartmann2.blogspot.com)

Facebook – Suzanne Hartmann – Author http://www.facebook.com/#!/pages/Suzanne-Hartmann-Author/45955180933

Twitter - @SuzInIL (http://twitter.com/#!/SuzInIL)

Wednesday, November 16, 2011

Collaborating with Other Writers: Board to Death by Tracy Ruckman

Thanks to Tracy for stopping by again today! Can't wait to read this book!

Collaborating With Other Writers

By Tracy Ruckman

Thanks for welcoming me to Pentalk once again, Carol and Linda.


Carol asked me to specifically discuss writing Board to Death with others –how we worked together, how the book came together.

I’ve always said that I learn best by doing, and Board to Death is a perfect example of that. Sometime in 2009 or early 2010, I got an idea about a murder mystery involving board games. I was having separate e-mail conversations with Amy Barkman and Debbie Roome at the time, and I tossed them the idea just to get a reaction. They had their own ideas so we decided to write a book of novellas, each one with a different game. We brainstormed briefly, then went our separate ways to start writing. Originally, we were going to use real board games, but could not get permission to do it from the manufacturers. So we created and designed our own board games. (We used those designs in our book trailer, and in the book as section dividers. If we ever strike oil, we’ll manufacture the games and set up a cottage industry! LOL!)

But just a few weeks after we began creating, life hit all of us hard in different ways. We ended up putting Board to Death on hold indefinitely.

Then, earlier this year, spring fever hit me and I asked the ladies if they’d be interested in starting again on the book. Both were eager. Debbie had almost finished her story, Amy was about halfway done with hers, and I, of course, still just had the framework. (I work well on deadlines, not so well without them.) So, again, we brainstormed a little more, and decided that Amy’s story would go first, to set up the connection to the other two stories. Debbie’s story would go next, and mine would be last, so I could tie them altogether.

When they finished their stories, they sent them to me, and then I realized we had a problem.

My story was much too similar to Debbie’s! We had used the same kind of set-up on the murder, with similar clues, and even one of our characters shared the same name. A week before deadline, I had to rewrite my story.

But it’s funny how that worked out. Amy read the first version and then when I finished, the second version. She wasn’t sure what I had changed to make it different, but I did, and the stories are not alike at all. I discovered during rewrites that much of the foundation was already in place for me to make the necessary changes without requiring major cutting. A few details changed the entire story.

Two aspects of our stories caught us by surprise. Amy’s has a strong spiritual theme in Victim – so much more than mine and Debbie’s that she actually removed an entire scene to balance out the book a bit more. Then, the romance element caught us all by surprise. Each story has a wonderful and unique hero that we all fell in love with. One reader commented that it was nice to see Baby Boomers find romance the way our characters did.

We’ve already begun work on Hands of Death, the second book in the Dangerous Games Series. Here’s what we learned from writing the first one:

  1. Brainstorm more than we think we need.
  2. Discuss the overall plot, murder, clues, weapons, and even character names in advance.
  3. Leave enough time before the deadline to make major changes if needed.
The one thing we excelled at while writing the book was having fun. We all love each other dearly and bouncing ideas off one another seemed natural. The whole venture has been fun, and reviews are proving that it shows in our stories.

If you have any questions, I’d be happy to answer them.


About Board to Death:

Baby Boomers Polly Nichols, Lindsay Wilson, and Gretchen Anderson may live worlds apart, but they have one common hobby – a penchant for board games.

Polly’s serene Kentucky campground turns sinister when the manager is a VICTIM of murder. In New Zealand, Lindsay’s life is turned upside down when MIND GAMES and evidence drag her into a murder case - as a suspect. At the Kettle’s On Campground in Georgia, Gretchen matches wits with a murderous wordsmith intent on winning the latest game of SENTENCED.

You’ll love the games, the characters, and the stories – and we promise, you won’t be BOARD to Death!

Board to Death is available in print and digital versions at:

Amazon (print) (Kindle)

Barnes & Noble (print) (Nook)

Smashwords

Visit our Websites:

www.AmyBarkman.com

www.DebbieRoome.com

www.TracyRuckman.com

Friday, November 11, 2011

Remembering You by Tricia Goyer

Pentalk Community would like to extend our most heartfelt thanks to all of those who served - past and present - to keep us safe and free. We honor you and will never forget the sacrifice you have made. And thank you, too, to the mothers, fathers, husbands, wives, children and all the others who struggled at home to allow our military to do what they do to keep freedom free.


Today, we welcome special guest, Tricia Goyer. Tricia has honored our vets, particularly those from WWII, in her work. I dare you not to get chills or even tear up as you read the story she chose to share with us today. Thank you, Tricia!

Remembering You

By Tricia Goyer

In the last ten years since I started interviewing veterans for my WWII novels, most have passed away. Some of them—realizing their days on earth were coming to an end—returned to Europe one last time with their family members to walk along paths they've never forgotten. Those trips inspired my most recent novel, Remembering You (http://www.triciagoyer.com/contemporaryfiction.html#RememberingYou).

One of the most amazing experiences was when I received an email from a woman named Hana. She'd heard of my book and knew I'd interviewed some of the veterans. She asked if I'd interviewed any medics. Then she told me an amazing story. Hana was born on a cart just outside of Mauthausen. Her mother had survived being a prisoner of another camp and was transported to Mauthausen at the end of the war.

Hana was just three weeks old when the Americans arrived, and she was very ill. Because of the filthy conditions she got a skin infection and sores covered her body. No one expected her to live. Yet one of the medics saw the small baby and knew he had to do something. Even though it took most of the day, he lanced and cleaned all Hana's sores, saving her life. Over the years she'd wanted to find the medic, but didn't know where to start.

I was amazed by Hana's story and told her I knew one medic—maybe he remembered who that man was. I gave Hana the contact information and I soon heard the good news. My friend LeRoy “Pete” Petersohn was the medic who'd saved her life! The two were soon reunited! After all these years Hana was able to look into the eyes of the man who saved her and thanked him. After all these years Pete was able to meet the woman he saved. “Baby!” he called out when he met her.

Remembering You is a work of fiction, but the experiences of the men are true. The experiences of the main character, Ava, are also true-to-life. I was busy with life when God pointed me to an amazing story, and to even more amazing men. I'm so thankful I took time to listen and care. I'm so thankful I allowed these men to share what … and who … they remembered most.


Tricia Goyer is a homeschooling mom of four and an acclaimed and prolific writer, publishing hundreds of articles in national magazines. She has also written books on marriage and parenting and contributed notes to the Women of Faith Study Bible. Tricia's written numerous novels inspired by World War II veterans, including her new release Remembering You. Tricia lives with her husband and four children in Arkansas. You can find out more information about Tricia at www.triciagoyer.com.

Wednesday, November 9, 2011

On Writing Fantasy by Shawn Lamb

Thanks to Shawn for stopping by to talk about writing fantasy!

On Writing Fantasy
By Shawn Lamb

First, I have to admit, fantasy was not my choice of genres. Writing the Allon YA fantasy series came about at the request of my daughter when she was in ninth grade. She liked fantasy, but nothing too dark, more along the lines of the good, old-fashion type like Lewis and Tolkien. At the time of her request, I was focus on my genre, historical fiction for adults. I also wrote for an animated cartoon series called BraveStarr back the 1980s, a sci-fi, western. The same studio that did He-Man and She-Ra produced BraveStarr. My husband worked on as a staff writer and storyboard artist of He-Man and She-Ra.

My writing experience and knowledge of kids helped the transition from one genre to another. However, I didn’t want to get too far-fetched like some fantasy authors who use hard to pronounce names and go out of their way to make up ‘things’ to take the place of common items just to be different. I wanted the kids to be able to understand the names and associate with the characters and settings.

The first thing I did was refresh my memory in regards to Lewis and Tolkien. I read a few of Lewis’ books as a kid, but only saw Tolkien’s books as animated movies by Rankin & Bass. What I discovered fascinated me. Even though the books were fantasy, they were based upon history and mythology. I could utilize my historical fiction background in developing the kingdom of Allon, the characters, setting, social structure and government. But again, unlike most fantasies, I didn’t want Allon to be pigeonholed in the Dark Ages, looking dirty and mysterious. Instead, I chose an equivalent Elizabethan time for the stories to take place. This is a transition time in history where some modernizing began in weaponry, medicine and conveniences, but mythology can be easily incorporated. As the series progresses, I bring in myths and legends from other cultures and follow the classic method of storytelling.

What makes Allon unique is the catalyst. When my daughter shared with her friends what I was doing, they became very interested and began visiting me to discuss the story. Soon those ‘story’ conversations turned personal and became themes for each new book in an effort to address the tough aspects of life that teens deal with.

Regardless of what genre, fantasy, historical, mystery, even sci-fi, the key to any good story is to make it believable. Yes, with certain genres the fantastic is present, but not to the exclusion of probability. What I mean is this - a character shouldn’t suddenly have a power without some foundation of its existence. Too many stories are written where a kid turns a certain age and poof – they have a magical power, find they are different and must determine why. This is very common in paranormal fantasy, especially copycat of favorite books or authors. But the inexperienced writer paints their character into a corner and must magically get out of it.

Remember these beloved characters - Frodo, Sam, Aragon, Peter, Susan, Lucy and Edmund. They did not use magic. If the story is well written, magic shouldn’t be necessary for a character to resolve a situation. Characters don’t grow by magic; they grow and change from experience. Magic is not a means to an end, rather let the conflict of the story do that and magic be an enhancement.



BIO: Shawn Lamb wrote for the animated cartoon BraveStarr. She also has won several awards for screenwriting, including a Certificate of Merit from the American Association of Screenwriters. In addition to her Allon series, she is launching a new historical fiction line for adults.

Website: http://www.allonbooks.com

Blog: http://allonbooks-thekingdomofallon.blogspot.com

Amazon: http://www.amazon.com/Shawn-Lamb/e/B002LPYXF0/ref=ntt_dp_epwbk_0

Monday, November 7, 2011

Plotting a Historical Setting by Diane Tatum

Thanks to Diane Tatum for stopping by today!

Plotting a Historical Setting

A historical setting is a silent character in a novel. Many reviews of my novel Gold Earrings remark on how the reader feels a part of the story, as though they can really see what I’ve described. As a novelist of a historical novel, that means I’ve done my job with not only the description of the setting, but in the layout of the historical package. Several important steps help novels live and breathe in history.

  1. Choose the best time period for the story. Gold Earrings is set in 1868, just after the Civil War. Many things in society have changed with the coming of Reconstruction. For Missouri, it’s a time for compromise. The politicians in Jefferson City are trying to appease the US government by appearing “reconstructed”, but their sentiments still run deeply to the lost Confederacy. In Gold Earrings, Charles Bardsley is such a character. He wants to appear in tune with the new governments around him while still maintaining power and control. That’s why he has selected a Yankee minister for the church. He assumes he can control Rev. Jonathan Thomson with his money and intimidation. However, Reconstruction has also created the beginnings of civil rights, the middle class, and women’s rights. Like it or not, Bardsley’s society is changing.
  2. Do lots of research. This sounds rather obvious on its face, but it’s not hard to be wrong about something you think you know. I wanted Angelina to have access to a sewing machine. When were they available to private citizens? I did some research and found that mechanical sewing machines, while new, were definitely available. I wanted Jonathan to be involved in an important, life-changing battle in the Civil War. I wrote about the battle in Hampton Roads because I lived in Newport News, VA, at the time I was writing and had access to museums and information. Be careful about assuming something. If you’re wrong, it will set the reader sideways, and they may never buy back into the scenario.
  3. Research period fashion. People wear different clothing in different periods of time. Description of dress sets the scene historically. For my soon-to-be completed Civil War novel, A Time to Choose, I researched military uniforms and rank insignia, as well as women’s fashion. In Gold Earrings, Angelina discovers that women don’t dress ‘fashionably’ on the prairie. Due to her background and city heritage, Angelina’s clothing is more fashionable and inspires the women of St. Joe to make themselves more fashionable. As is true in all time periods, class, wealth, and power are also denoted by dress. These details enrich the characters in the story.
  4. Include historical details and personalities as they fit into the story. St Joseph, MO, was the perfect place for Gold Earrings because it was an edge-of- the-West town. The general store where Angelina keeps the books and clerks provides necessities and luxuries for those on the edge of civilization. St. Joe was the beginning of the road to western expansion. All kinds of people would be part of such a town. I used Jesse James as one such detail. In western Missouri, the members of the James gang were Confederate heroes. Jesse James used an alias, Mr. Howard, when doing business in the St. Joseph area. Allowing such a historical character to come on stage in a chapter allowed me to insert a part of history only Missourians may know. This detail lets my Missouri readers nod and say, “Oh yes, he did!” to a semi-obscure piece of history.

    Medical advancements come in different time periods as well. Disease, surgery, medicines, and well-being are time period sensitive. Travel options also change over time. Is it a hansom cab, a yellow cab, or a black Town Car? Are there horses on the street? Is the street dirt, cobbled, or paved?

  1. Know the geography of the place in time. Things change over time. Just because something exists today doesn’t mean it existed then. My soon-to-be-completed novel, A Time to Choose, is set in Washington DC during the Civil War. My heroine Maggie is a journalist using a pen name in order to be published. In my haste to get on with the story, I assumed that the Washington Post was the paper for which Maggie wrote her column. I was down to the final chapters when I watched the recent filmThe Conspirator. At the very end of the movie, the film tells us that lawyer Freddie Aiken became the Washington Post’s first city desk editor. Freddie Aiken was the defense lawyer for Mary Surratt who was tried and hanged for collusion with John Wilkes Booth in the assassination of Abraham Lincoln. Bad news for me! My follow-up research showed that the Post was not published until after the Civil War. (BTW ‘Find and replace’ is a wonderful tool for this type of error!)

    Since I grew up in Missouri, I had studied state history and geography in elementary school. I knew things about Missouri that other writers and readers might not know when I wrote Gold Earrings.

  1. Add minor details as often as possible. In Gold Earrings, the train stops along the way to St. Joseph are this type of detail. The Internet is an amazing fact-checker as is the local library. In the Bibliography of Gold Earrings is an obscure book about the railroad. Angelina’s train ride across Missouri is documented with the stops along the way to St. Joe. The sequence moves Angelina and the reader from the large cities of Boston and Chicago into the small prairie towns of Missouri. Holiday celebrations can change due to the historical setting. In A Time to Choose, Christmas is an important marker of time during the years of the Civil War. The unfinished Capitol is part of the DC landscape.

Some important sources to find help. Tourist books and pamphlets have many important details about regions as well as little known historic details as in On this Spot:Pinpointing the Past in Washington DC and Historic Photos of Washington, DC. Museum information in both displays and gift shop books can inspire a historical detail. History books, of course, can give general facts about a time period. Specialty books about the time period concerning the military, culture, fashion, etc. like A Writer’s to Everyday Life in the Civil War can help the writer understand and consider details about the time period. Biographies of historical figures and their lives can also help the writer stay in context with the time period. The Internet is a super-tool. Be cautious about using information from unreliable sources. Anyone can write anything and sound credible. Do your homework. Don’t use anything without verifying it as truth.

WARNING! Just because you know all this information doesn’t mean you must include it all in the story! You’re not writing a history book; you’re writing historical fiction. Research helps the writer create the world for the story. Only use the information that gives it life and sustenance. Keep track of your sources; create the bibliography to show the reader you are well informed AND to allow the reader to check out your sources for their own edification.


Diane E. Tatum began writing in grade school with short mystery stories, a play performed by her sixth grade class, and a dictionary of supernatural beings. High school found her writing serial fiction with her friends, including developing characters and plot lines through hand-written notes. Gold Earrings is an outgrowth of a short story written in a high school creative writing class, More historical Christian novels are in the works; most are part of an historical series.

Friday, November 4, 2011

An Author's Study of the Classics, Ten Characteristics That Make Good Books Great by Lorilyn Roberts

Thanks to Lorilyn for stopping by and talking about what makes some of the Classics, well... classic!


An Author's Study of the Classics

Ten Characteristics That Make Good Books Great

By Lorilyn Roberts


When I began my Masters in Creative Writing from Perelandra College two years ago, I was frightfully afraid I wouldn't be able to write fiction. I had spent the last thirty years reading and writing nonfiction in a journalistic setting. Long ago were the days I spent as a child reading fiction books about mushroom planets, traveling through tesserects, meeting talking animals, solving mysteries of hidden staircases, becoming a heroine, and falling in love with war heroes. Those delightful stories were my constant companion and escape from reality; how different my early years would have been without those great books.

As I grow older, it's refreshing to see my inner child peek out and remind me I am still who I was way back then--yes, a little bigger around the waist with a few more wrinkles, but I treasure those wonderful stories that were such a big part of my childhood. What was it about them that stole my heart and gave me such a love for books and writing?

I wondered, can I write a book similar to those that I so dearly loved? Matthew 10:24 states, "A student is not above his teacher, nor a servant above his master." I reasoned, how can I be the best writer possible unless I read the best literature? So I asked my professor, Ken Kuhlken, "What is the most perfect book ever written?" From this question we had a series of discussions that led to me taking two classes of independent study. I set about reading some of the books he suggested. I am now finishing my second class and am looking forward to reading works by C.S. Lewis and J.R.R. Tolkien. I saved the best for last.

If you are interested in reading my reviews and critiques of these classics, you can click on the following link where some are listed and more will be posted throughout this week and next: http://livingourfaithoutloud.blogspot.com/

After reading over a million words from the best literature, I have come to appreciate what makes a good book great is not by accident or luck. The stunning story that emerges from the pen of a Master is a work of art--painstakingly designed, written, and edited. The stories are not created out of a "one size fits all' mentality or factory-produced where the plots are predictable and the characters "stereotypical." To write a great book, I won't find any GPS directions to get me there or weekend seminars to make it easy. Those activities serve useful purposes, but not to write great stories. It takes a commitment to excellence, patience, talent, and perseverance.

After reading ten of the best classics, I also wonder if great writing is caught, not taught, borne out of pain and suffering. I was surprised by the similarities in the biographies of classic authors: The crucible of suffering was imprinted in their lives and found its way into the pages of their books.

To help me sort through what makes these books classics, I have listed ten characteristics I found in common. You might be surprised--I know I was.

1. Create characters that will be remembered long after the book is finished. We are made for relationships, and this part of our nature carries over into books. For example, I remember my first love crush from The Exodus by Leon Uris when I was seventeen; and the poor, battered soul in The Screwtape Letters by C.S. Lewis. Make characters memorable and your book will be remembered.

2. The Christian worldview speaks to the heart of man. While fads come and go, new ideas spread across continents, and knowledge increases with each passing year, written on our hearts are values that cross generations and cultures. All the classics I have read present a Christian worldview. While some make no mention of the Bible (Frankenstein), it is implied, and writers who have written classics embrace this universal truth.

3. Write tight plots. John Piper has written a wonderful book called Don't Waste Your Life. I would say don't waste your reader's precious time by including scenes or characters that add nothing to the story. Every scene, every character, and every chapter must serve a point. Examples of the best are A Tale of Two Cities and Wuthering Heights. That doesn't mean there can't be variety. It just means each component must be absolutely necessary to propel the story forward.

4. To add to your book's greatness, let it make a statement about society, about life, about those things that are deep within us that cause us to groan and laugh, reflect and ponder, and most of all, never to give up hope (The Brothers Karamazov).

5. Take risks. Original works oftentimes make people squirm because they take the reader out of his comfort zone. Some of the great classics were not originally well received because they were "different" (Wuthering Heights).

6. Don't shy away from embracing controversial topics or paradigms that impact the story and raise the stakes for the protagonist (The Grand Inquisitor, Crime and Punishment, Frankenstein, The Power and the Glory, Wuthering Heights, The Brothers Karamazov, and Pride and Prejudice).

7. Redemption out of chaos brings hope, leaving the reader with optimism about his future. I am reminded that our words will outlive us in the pages of our books. Make your book a gift worth remembering. (Great Expectations, Crime and Punishment, Wuthering Heights, Pride and Prejudice)..

8. The tone, symbolisms, and motifs should work in unison to undergird the subliminal theme and arc of the story. Make it relevant to the reader (Wuthering Heights, Crime and Punishment, The Power and the Glory).

9. Slow down the forward progression of the story sufficiently to explore the psychological and spiritual warfare experienced by the protagonist For example, here is a comment I wrote from my analysis of Crime and Punishment: "Never mind the 'punishments' I received. What I learned early on is I have a conscience. A relentless whisper spoke to me even when I didn't want to listen. My guilt pricked my soul like a thorn, bothering me more than I could have imagined. I did not know I would feel so miserable before I committed each of my various 'crimes.' I was forced to carry a heavy burden that painfully weighed me down until I either confessed my sin or my guilt was discovered. The suffering was relentless and did more to drive me to a loving God than the severe discipline I received from those who showed no grace." (Frankenstein, Wuthering Heights, Crime and Punishment, The Brothers Karamazov, and Pride and Prejudice).

10. Leave the reader forever changed. If your book is forgotten after the last page is read, you will have forfeited a great opportunity to make the world a better place.

If you have additional characteristics you would like to share, please do.

Lorilyn Roberts is an up-and-coming new author who writes with passion about life--politically incorrect topics, homeschooling, adoption, book reviews, author interviews, inspirational stories, family topics, Bible studies, poetry, and the art of writing. Lorilyn has written three books: The Donkey and the King, Children of Dreams, and How to Launch a Christian Best-Seller Book. She is the founder the John 3:16 Marketing Network, a network of Christian authors which focuses on launching books, and the president of the Gainesville, Florida, Word Weavers Chapter.

Lorilyn's personal website: http://lorilynroberts.com; blog: http://lorilynroberts.blogspot.com. To learn more about the John 3:16 Marketing Network, you can visit http://john316mn.blogspot.com.
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